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My friend

A vast world is waiting for you,
a number of works can be done by you
numerous deprived can be benefited through you.

You are created for a spicific purpose,
a special place and a special work is chosen for you.

Every moment you have the chance
to improve yourself,
you are the master of your life
only knowledge can recognise
yourself in you.

With strength you will reject
your narrowness,
you will grow when you will wish to
break the shell of your confinement.

The environment will change
nature will collaborate,
peace and happiness will
never quit you
if you desire yourself to be like so.

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The world will be beautiful only changing our thoughts.
Written September 20th, 2006

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  • Spiritual Nature
    January 8, 2008
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    What a though provoking piece! "you will grow when you will wish to break the shell of your confinement." Then the final stanza is so filled with such great wisdom and it gave me a sense of peace and harmony, as "nature will collaborate,". Wonderful poem, my friend. Blessings, Doris


  • duana
    May 27, 2007
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    wow, nice poem.

  • Rajaram
    April 29, 2007
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    Hey! you have presented a beauty of a poem. Greatly encouraging. I do appreciate your work. It is nice and it motivates the reader. You have enormous talent. I like the ending, " The environment will change
    nature will collaborate,
    peace and happiness will
    never quit you
    if you desire yourself to be like so. " What you have told is very true


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 18, 2007

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    Wonderfully done. I do believe we can manifest our beliefs into a reality. We are a society that takes too much for granted..
    Soulful Woman

  • atty-poet
    February 15, 2007
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    very etheral quality to your writing. "the wisedom of a sage" feel to it.


  • Dolphin Shaktiheart
    October 25, 2006
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    What beautiful words of wisdom.

    namaste
    smoosh

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