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oh you got me now

Green eyes,
Oh those green eyes,
They got me now.
My fears personified through the
Petrified cracks inside the wood
Of my mind,
So many secrets sleep inside
The lies of devotion
You sang so loud.
So beautiful the noise of the words
You could wake me from an enchanted sleep.
And now I sleep
Inside the cracks
Waiting for the voice
Of emotional
Stillness, to take back
These eyes
Oh these green eyes,
They got me now.

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thanks for reading.xxx
Written September 20th, 2006

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  • nesca
    October 15, 2006
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    beautiful charlie, yahoo, nice to see, great words and meaning, too bad i got blue eyes...nice to see some new writing from you...

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  • individuality gold member
    September 20, 2006
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    a nice light piece of poetry which you have written here, an enjoyable poem, good flow to it. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...