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Darke Aglowes

The only light,
in this street,
is in your mind,
where your nightmares,
run wild(you have to betray to survive).
The only light,
in this city,
is in your heart.(which is no more, your senses disappear).
The only light,
in this country,
is in your soul(and is not there anymore).
The only light,
for miles and miles,
is in your imagination.
From where I stand,
there's nobody else.
Except one,
me.

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Written September 20th, 2006

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  • RavenDragonmind
    October 9, 2006
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    lol....you're NOT an idiot.


  • Hated.
    October 8, 2006
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    ok well than im just an idiot


  • RavenDragonmind
    October 8, 2006
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    Dont degrade yourself!! my girlfriend is blonde and she is the top student of her class!!!!!!


  • Hated.
    September 26, 2006
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    pretty good kinda confusing but im blonde so thas probably y lol pretty good tho


  • RavenDragonmind
    September 26, 2006
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    lol

  • Headstrong2TakeUOn
    September 22, 2006
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    nope i meant confusious! lol i dont really get this one, ur writing is still too mature for me


  • RavenDragonmind
    September 22, 2006
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    lol, confusious? i think you mean confusing.....

  • Headstrong2TakeUOn
    September 21, 2006
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    confusious

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