Did you think that if this ended
we would still be friends?
or was i just someone useful to you
that you could always run back to?
I hurt myself becuse of you
I lost something that hurt you to
you didnt think and you didnt see
just how much you really did mean to me!
I've known you for sometime
and we've been through hell and back
but you always come running to me
when i dont need you
you only come back when you want me to hurt
you always come running back if you just want some more
I dont know what to do anymore
my heart was always yours,
and you just hurt and hurt me
until you cant take it anymore!
I'm always here
I'm always around
when ever you see me you always frown!
please dont hurt me again
that second time hurt me to much
now look what you've done to me.
why cant you bloody see
the tears i cry
have been built up inside
they are the tears of pain
the ones that made me go insain
I hurt you once
you hurt me twice
what am i ganna do to make this pain go away?
Please do leave me
please say good-bye
mine and your little secreat is burning me up inside!
what if we kept it
would we be happy
or would you hate me until the day i died?
Author notes
wow ok didnt know i had that in me, ryto then well its true so yer lol up to you all ta tell me what you think and be honest lol
Written September 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- All those feelings you wish you wouldn't get for...certain people. by Live with a passion.
300 points, ended November 8, 2006, 37 entries
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I am going to assume that you either chose to write this free form, or in epic form, due to it's length...Alot was said here, but if the reader reads past the words, it gets broken down into a single word...resentment. Others may choose other words, but with this piece, you are able to do that...
It's very somber, and sad... just knowing that may couples go through this everyday, and that this is just a normal feeling that many unforunate couples have.
Very well written in light of the depth that was taken here... great write and good luck in the contest!
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