a noise was down the stairs
father was shot
2 dark figures by my mothers side
a gun to her throat
they mumbled some words
to keep her calm
her eyes gazed upon me
"run!" she shouted
she was shot
i stared
my legs started moving
walking
walking faster
and faster into a run
i ran away
locking myself behind a door
sorrow and pain covered my soul
i felt like the whole world came crashing down upon me
a gun to my side
revenge and rage
without thinking twice
i shot them both without a pause
silence filled the room
guilt and regret filled my heart
my heart beated faster and faster
as the sirens came closer
for i did not want to be a prisoner
i dropped the gun
and began to run
Author notes
this is a story wrote and turned it into a poem.
Written September 14th, 2006
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um thanx ^^
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thats sad. i like it tho you can realy paint a pic in someones mind with how the gril was feeling
"locking myself behind a door
sorrow and pain covered my soul
i felt like the whole world came crashing down upon me
a gun to my side
revenge and rage
without thinking twice
i shot them both without a pause
silence filled the room
guilt and regret filled my heart
my heart beated faster and faster"
thats nice keep it up
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