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It's Never Too Late

Suicide of love took away all that matters
And buried the remains in cold blooded passion
Leaving your heart to be sown shut
Once again killing your hope filled dreams

Loneliness consumes as the hatred rips you apart
Scream out in throbbing agony as you lose control
Though no one hears your cries
[You forgot you're all alone]

The light has faded and death seems too far
You're aching inside, and The Devil is waiting
Scream out Love's name in vein to all
Devils dance while Angels smile; and you're eaten alive

Close your eyes and remember as the sweet sound of silence consumes you
You've cried like God cries the rain;
And it's time you laid your blackened soul to rest
[You will endure your final slumber in the dark side of Eden]

'If love is a labour, I'll slave to the end'
But the end is here, so give up and let go
There is an antidote for the poison in your heart
Give me your hand and I'll lead you to freedom

[No matter what happens; It's never too late]
[To say you're sorry and appreciate]
[The things that you have in life]
[Forget about the pain, forget about the strife]
[Forget about sorrows of the past]
[Think of the future; or your strength wont last]
[No matter what happens; Don't take your life]
[Find the courage within and put down the knife]
[Keep on going and you'll never break]
[Just remember: It's never too late]



Alicia M. Donovan ŠAll Rights Reserved

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September 19, 2006
Written September 19th, 2006

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  • Princess Amy
    September 20, 2006
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    Very good Poem keep up the good work...


  • The Guardian
    September 20, 2006
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    aww so sad baby, u have to remember though, im always here for my baby


  • My Last Breath.x
    September 20, 2006
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    AMANDA! OMG! MANDA BEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I MISSED YOU SO MUCH SISTAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WHERE ARE YOU?! ARE YOU OKAY?! OHMYGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WHERE ARE YOU STAYING?!
    YOU BETTER NOT HURT YOURSELF AGAIN!
    I MISS YOU!
    I LOVE YA!
    OMG OMG OMG OMG =)
    Where are you,Manda?!!?!? AHHH



    LOVE YAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!

    Dont forget..WE'RE MERMAIDS..BIOTCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH =D


  • Troubled Pianist
    September 20, 2006
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    alicakes you will never be alone!!! I'm always gonna be with you in your heart or in spirit. you are such an awesome person and you mean so much to me. you have a place in my heart and as long as you remember that I will always be with you. and even when you don't remember that I will still be with you.

    i should've seen that last part before i did what i did. i should have put down that knife because i hurt and worried people who love me and I have sworn never to do it again. i'm sorry....

    anyways i love you remember that ali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!