Drifting away from reality, I see her.
I see those eyes, those eyes that seem to haunt me,
Those eyes that I want to stare into,
Those eyes that I want to stare at me.
She approaches me and I embrace her.
I can taste her sweet kiss, the one I have been longing for.
I hold her in my arms,
And whisper sweet nothings into her ear.
The bell rings and I snap back into reality.
I see her and wish that dream were real.
Watching her from afar, I only want to hold her,
Have that sweet kiss I could taste so vividly in a daydream.
I only want to be with her.
Author notes
Written September 19th, 2006
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A contest entry
- Close Your Eyes.... by CapturedMoon.
359 points, ended September 24, 2006, 16 entries
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Amazing
This poem makes me smile. I don't know what else to say about it. I just was reading it again and found out I hadn't commented on it. Which is weird considering its my favorite poem of yours.Okay I'll leave you alone now.
Love!~Mia
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very good write you had me believing that she was real and that my friend is a good device bc you proved the topic and its also very sweet and romantic
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