He lies about my life
He lies about his life
Broken promises is all he has
A broken world is all he'll have
I will not stay
I will not stay
He believes I am in need
But I pray not to need him
Give him an inch
He'll take a mile
Before I know it
He'll bleed me dry
"Anything worth having is worth dieing for"
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Written September 19th, 2006
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Understandable piece, hopefully we will not bleed you dry.
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Great
This is a wonderful write, hon, very expressive.
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so don't let him back in, sweetie....i love you...thinking of you always.....
wmla.................................Lionslove
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o , this is really sad one and touchy . nicely done ...
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This is sad but I like how you hope to get rid of him and be free of him! This is very touching too!
You used few words but managed to get your feelings and your point across.
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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all i can say ayten is "goose bumps" lovely poem full of sadness aimed to the heart.wish u well keep on the good work
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beautifully written but very sad
As Babby said, no one will bleed you dry because we'll pump up happiness in your life. ups and downs, you are on the down now but you will be rising up again and you have already started. so dont fret or lose hope.
we love you.
beautiful words yet very painful, you painted a very sad picture -
words from the heart babe. A few drops of ur sea of tears are poured in ur poems, yet still enough to quake the readers soul.
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Ayten this was heartfelt
you've said so much a few lines... life try us on...
Your frinds won't let you bleed dry... We'll pump happiness in you...
May God be with you and grant you solace...
babby
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