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Away In A Breeze

So touch me one last time.
Give me that everlasting breath of air.
Cradle my head against your body
Give all the others others a reason to stare.

I'm waiting again to feel you.
Your chest rise and fall in waiting.
Watching your arms wrap lovingly around me.
And see behind your eyes, a mind debating.

The breeze blows our hair against the sky
and a blanket of stars caress us like we belong with them.
Time fades away only as fast as we let it
And we fall in love over and over again.

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Written September 19th, 2006

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