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brooke my evil angel

as i sit here i think of you often.
even though iam the cowared in the night and  you are a goddess in the moon light iam scared to admit it but Everytime I see you. i cant tell you how much i like you because iam a cowared.
i tought you were only a dream because i had never seen anything so beuitiful.but then i tried to tell you how i felt but as soon as i told you.you seemed not to care. it seems that iam nothing more than a friend and in some sick way am alright with that.i would rather be a friend who will protect you. than nothing at all. it seems that i loved you wean there was no love at all.  

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Written September 19th, 2006

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  • wave picture frame
    February 18, 2007

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    this is obviously very personal to you, it feels that way when i read it. i can also relate to it. nice work friend. keep turning your thoughts into words. peace -wave