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lying eyes

i look into those lying eyes,
the ones that always told on you,
i can see threw those lying eyes,
the ones in which i see no truth.

two  years went by and still i tried
my love i put in you.
but now I've gotten a reality check
you left me alone to die

now i see right threw those lying  eyes
wishing you would step up or step out
because I'm tired of looking threw those lying eyes!!!

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Written September 19th, 2006

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  • boo2u987
    September 19, 2006
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    thanks for the comment it's the first time i written in a while


  • Felix B. Hellsings
    September 19, 2006
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    Insightful!

    Are not the eyes the windows to the soul? I've seen those kind of eyes but never was I in love with them. Perhaps, I was lucky that one time.
    *~*Mad Hatter Felix