Our fears of life are so unjust,
but by our faith we will endure.
For God is where we find our trust,
our fears of life are so unjust.
From out of ashes, comes the dust,
a place in heaven we’ll secure.
Our fears of life are so unjust,
but by our faith we will endure.
When angels call our names aloud,
we’ll meet with Jesus in the sky.
A promise kept, sacredly vowed,
when angels call our names aloud.
With chariots upon the cloud,
to take us to our home that’s nigh.
When angels call our names aloud,
we’ll meet with Jesus in the sky.
Author notes
triolet
Written September 19th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Form Poetry (for chocolate eating peg leg pirate groupies) by Kiran.
450 points, ended January 8, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dear as I read this I was thinking how very hard it had to have been to write this, but then I realized that this was written way before the tragedy in your life and it strikes me so eerily because it was as if this was written for those two precious angels when I was reading it. I guess what that means is that you have left an impression on my heart with another poem about them that has embedded itself so deep that when your words speak to me elsewhere their beautiful spirits find their way to peek out to listen to grandmas work as well. I hope you are doing okay dear, I know this is a difficult time for you and my prayers have been with you and your family.
As for this particular write, is no doubt in my mind that it deserved a trophy, I would not change a thing, well done dear, well done!
Oh, by the way, I stopped by to read this as part of an ambushing by the Poetic Bandits this particular write was my hoodwinking assignment of the day and it was purely my pleasure to have it assigned to me. I hope you enjoy your day of ambushing by the members of the POetic Bandits I know we are sure enjoying reading your works! God Bless you dear!
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I thank you ever so much for this comment and your applause... As I re-read this poem, I see ... Like maybe my spirit knew ...
Thank you for your prayers, I greatly appreciate it ...
Much love, Dove
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I have a feeling that when we finally meet Jesus we will wonder why we waited so long to do so.
Good luck in the contest
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A beautiful triolet. Very serene and tranquil with some beautiful imagery. Really lovely piece. Thank you for entering this contest and all the best!
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Thank you very much for the comment, I am glad you enjoyed it
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Great piece of writing with a lovely feel and message..well done and good luck...best wishes Paul
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Thank you
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What a pleasure is was to find your most encouraging poem that fills one with hope and anticipation! It is written true to form and your words flowed smoothly with a nice cadence. Thanks for sharing this inspiring poem. joy
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Beautiful, you are so good at forms. You really amaze me
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Just wonderful!! I have no corrections or suggestions. Thanks for your entry. Be blessed. Glenda
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Beautiful piece that flowed perfectly loved it.calm and peaceful.Well done with this lovely piece
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