Dusted with sunshine,
framed only by the sky.
wind beneath our eagle wings
we are dancing
as feather-weight angels.
morning brightness
cloaked in saffron cellophane
is touching
our crystal spirits
and sowing seeds of nostalgic songs
deep within our lives.
vertigo - a tie-dyed
sarong wrapping my eyes
and arms within it’s coloured touch.
faith, happiness, love
tied together with silver ribbons,
peppered in magnesium heartbeats -
laughter.
waves of alfresco smiles soaked in
flood tides of sunshine.
- this is
alive.
Author notes
Perhaps I should be studying for the maths exam, perhaps I should be sleeping. But it's hard when all I want to do is run around in the sunshine with my friends again. Much love to you
Option 4 - a sunny day.
Written ages ago on September 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options, but a different kind! by Erin200.
424 points, ended July 16, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical comments are most welcome.
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Good job. Thanks for enterring my contest. You're going to be a finalists! YAY! *everyone in room claps* Thanks again and keep writing!
AmberAngel546 -
Aww, thank you ever so much
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another amazing write from you, wow you keep amazing me each time, the more writes you do, the more i faint..because they're just so gorgeous and enchanting and they're written by none other than talented you..
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Long live the dancing, long live the love
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Long live the dancing, long live the love
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Utterly beautiful, m'dear. So much delicious imagery and feeling in this.
And I'm backing up Teggen here - the dancin' will never stop.
Much love to you.
-Jennary Canary -
Endless love to you too, my dear.
I loved "waves of alfresco smiles soaked in / flood tides of sunshine" - my favourite lines by far. This was such a warm, heartfelt poem overflowing with sunlight and love. We shall continue to dance in daylight, exams or no exams.
~crimsonfury
Edited on Sep 20, 2:52 because 'Can't Spell.'.
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