WRITTEN IN A PEN (FOR MY ITALIAN FRIEND)
There’s a pig, for now I’ll not name,
Who is putting on me all the blame;
Since the spotlight's on his Colleen,
Instead of his muddy flying machine.
I fear I may be too late,
Since he took off into the sty;
To a secluded spot right by the sea,
His favorite one, Pork St. Lucie.
If you haven’t guessed by now,
Its Aviator Pig, whose having a cow!
Please read this when he returns from his trip,
And tell him to oink if he loves my script
Author notes
my niece's stuffed animal-she's a vegitarian since adopting Aviator - her dad always threatens to have Aviator for dinner......again, you had to be there
Written September 19th, 2006
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A contest entry
- Edna's Contest for UTTER Drivel and DOGGEREL- PRE-WRITES only by Edna Sweetlove.
400 points, ended March 17, 2007, 16 entries
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this has all the poo nesessary for greatness in this contest
too bad u hadda put notes in about what its about cuz now it makes more sense sorta. lots of poo for defiling rhythm an meter an weirdness but theres a cuteness too an that you wrote it for your niece so its special an its got meaning even if only your niece gets it, poo deduction.
To a secluded spot right by the sea,
His favorite one, Pork St. Lucie.
humor costs poo too when its done good an that part was
this is hard to judge but on a scale of 1-10, 10 bein the worse poem ever
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Hhhhmmmm.
You’re in the right contest and with the unevenness, the nonsense and the “thrown together” feel of it, you may be a finalist. I can give it
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that poem jus had me confused....which is a good thing...good luck =)
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Carly Pop
Thats not that bad i like this great rhyme and flow too. Good luck with your poem.
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Thank you for entering Edna's Contest for UTTER Drivel and DOGGEREL- PRE-WRITES only and you have got into the spirit of things. This is total drivel. I have provisionally shortlisted you but the competition is hot. 8 entries in the first 10 minutes. I have had to stop multiple entries and have extended the total max entries to 1,000.
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