A fine thread
Between two fragile hearts
The immense booming
Of the Heart in action
Sweeping away ignorance
Of Loves' true nature;
Of our Creator.
Gentle as a flower
Turning it's shining face
Towards a pale morning sun;
His presence inspires Bliss
His lit lamp
Lights the lamps of many
Dear friend of mine
Feel "His" caring nature
Always on our side
Moulding and shaping us
Beyond our understanding
One heart to another
Author notes
This is all I have to give.
Written September 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- BLESSINGS AND LOVING THOUGHTS # 2 : ~ PRESENCE ~ by maa.
333 points, ended October 5, 2006, 8 entries
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Thanks dear Laura,
Your encouragement and deep understanding is always very appreciated. Love Tara -
Dear Dragonsear,
Sometimes, dear one, I'm too tough on you about your poems.
I'm so sorry for that. I always find your writings inspiring, though you have shown me that perhaps they are sometimes over my head. I live a very simple life and have a disability that makes life very slow for me so I'm not always up to spead with what goes on "out there".
Keep writing, keep shining, You work is wonderful, love Tara -
as one who know such another one
I my self am blessed by your sharing....
I only wish that there were many more
who were not hesitant to dare such caring....m -
My Dear Sister Tara,
Your words of love are heart felt prayers of hope and unity.
I really love the ending stanza:
Dear friend of mine
Feel "His" caring nature
Always on our side
Moulding and shaping us
Beyond our understanding
One heart to another
Sometimes life gives us challenges to help us grow. We do not always understand the "Why's" of some of the seemingly accidental misshaps, yet we can still remember that we are never alone. Through this remembrance, that we are all ONE, and forgiving our imaginary victimization, this is where communion begins.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
namaste-
Laura
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Tara, this is so sweetly divine and beautifully penned for a friend such as this. I truly appreciate your attentions to my writing... I hope sometimes you are as uplifted and inspired as I am about yours. Take care and much love.
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dearest tara,
thank you so much for your precious participation and for a poem filled with heartfelt words which inspire serenity, peacefulness and wisdom upon the reader. the image of the fine thread between two fragile hearts has touched me a lot, and awakened something in my own heart that I am not able to explain with words ... for which I thank you ...
may your blessings for presence return to you a thousandfold.
maa -
You have captured the magical aura of our dear Presence. From the very moment he first came to me he has been like a star blossoming in the night sky! Wonderful Dear Tara!
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BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
So beautifully expressed! A sweet and tender poem.
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Dear one, what a beautiful mirror you are. Thank you for your lovely kind sentiments, Little sister
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