Kool Aid streams with stripes~~indigo green
Cha Cha and Hustle under the tides muscle.
Clams bake while crustaceans rake
the oceans floor with swift leg motions.
Sea anemones giggle on rolling stones
watching the starfish make a wish.
The male sea horses ride proudly alongside
their tiny babies in tow galloping slow.
Mermaids sing on a long kelp swing
as the dolphins chime a hymn.
Flippers clap when the sea lions rap
after the electric eels slide on their heels.
Turtles snap in their shells to tell
the red lobsters they were imposters.
Their pinchers tried to pretend and send
a deep sea tale to a baby beluga whale.
Author notes
Thank You Jordan Starr for Allowing me the opportunity to use Your Magnificent picture for this verse...
When I viewed this Image..I instantly noticed a sea horse face....and babies around him...So that is my Inspiration along with a verse to share with my daughter who loves silly writes...
Many children just love Kool Aid...so that is why I added that piece
Written September 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Painting Inspired......come see ..... by greyhaime.
400 points, ended October 4, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Aaaaaaaaaw that is ok
I have that effect on people..they usually trip and fall
j/k
The seahorse grabbed me and we did the tango
so I was hoping everybody else noticed it too
-hears crickets in the background-
(Lady Stone knew the secret all along)..
Glad You enjoyed it (Whew) and Appreciate Your time
and Generous comment!
Seahorse gallops away....trips and falls...
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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wow, thanks hun for your entry,, this must have slipped past me when you entered,,my bad... wonderfully done...and suc uniqness to he whole thing,, thank you again so much.. and good luck in the contest..
Krystal
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and Thank You for Your visit Arkbear!
I'm Glad You could see what I saw too
Appreciate Your Generous comment and time
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Great job with your pen!
Wow....Cool poem!....I saw everything you described...This is such an amazing piece of art..You have a way with words and such grace beyond my grammatical perception...Well done on this write!...Best of luck with this beautiful Poem. 
Sincerely, Arkbear.
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Thank You for the Generous comment Sweet Soul!
Appreciate Your visit and time-as always !
I'm headed to mine too
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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You came up with this by looking at THAT? Wow good job I really liked this fun poem. right before bed thanks.
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Thank You for the Generous comment Terry!
Appreciate Your visit and time!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Munchkin
You came to visit mommy here on my page
Thank You Sweetness!!!
I Love the comment You made
and it brought smiles
Thank You
Did it make You laugh
Wrote this to make Your tummy tickle
Mommy is Proud of You Tiffany!
You keep smiling ok
Many blessings to You
Much love back at You
~~~Mommy
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Love it!
I like it!
i hope you get 1st place.
love you soo much
many ~blessings~ in YOU!!!
of love Mini-munkin
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Excellent
This is a very well written and indeed thought provoking Poem, Desire . Keep up the great work and best of luck to you in the contest.
Cheers
Terry
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