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Spoken by the trees

Can you hear the language

that is spoken by the trees?
Can you sense the ancient ones,

blowing with the breeze?

The eagle set his wings to flight,

in motion with the moon
The medicine wheel is spinning,

dark days upon us soon

Their voices all around us

in the shadows of our fears
Advising to get ready

as the ending days draw near

Speak up to all the nations

make your voice be loudly heard
Our beating drums have joined force

the merging has occurred

She has seven stars upon her head

and a torch to light the way
But she’s not the one to follow.

Her red, white, blue’s in disarray

Therefore seek your inner voice

and also listen to the trees
They're asking us to pray for peace,

with the ancients in the breeze














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Written September 18th, 2006

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  • Spiritual Nature
    April 5, 2007

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    Wow, what an awesome and deeply moving poem. One of the best I have read! Wow, what a might piece. Really great. YOU HAVE BEEN HOODWINKED!!!


    • FifthDove
      April 5, 2007
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      Thank you, I really appreciate the look-see, applaud and commentDove*


  • individuality gold member
    September 23, 2006
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    Our beating drums has joined force - have joined force
    Their asking us to pray for peace, - they're asking...

    other than those two points this is a good piece.
    thank you for entering your piece and good luck to you - spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • sandgoddess
    September 19, 2006
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    lovely write, Dove.

    i appreciate the wisdom (and critisism?) that went into its creation.

    very well done, dear

    best,
    rachel


  • babygirltmple619
    September 19, 2006
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    VERY nicely written. i like it a lot and i like the background. nicely done.


  • Smirnoff Ice
    September 19, 2006
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    excellent

    This is beautiful loved the rhyming scheme and the way it was set out.your poetry never fails to disappoint me.well done with this great piece


  • FifthDove
    September 18, 2006
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    Hey, I thank you very much for the support you always give me. Your comments are always a pleasure for me to read. I appreciate you my poet friend


  • capricornpoet
    September 18, 2006
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    The winds talk of wisdom through trees

    Nature and the ones who lived by natures laws and respected
    the natural communion of humankind and his surroundings;
    living in harmony and respecting all life forms, that is
    the way we should be , and the trees are the source of its health . Your words were gentle as a song,prophetic as an old sage .


  • queen Moderators member
    September 18, 2006
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    I believe we are nearing the end times

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