Never ask a lover the time
For by his watch, an hour is a second
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Somethin' short
Written September 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Give Me A Two-Liner by PrettyRagDoll.
600 points, ended May 19, 2007, 73 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I absolutely adored this piece. In two lines, you creatively and sweetly portrayed the feelings and lives of two people in love. The shortness of this write only added to the powerful meaning behind your words.
-BabyBear -
Crazy thing is, I wrote it feeling rather heart broken...
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That is a great quote
It really is true
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wow thats amazing not something i normally like but its so true good job as always i would have liked to see it a little longer though
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That is great!!!!!!! It was an amazing two lines... it seemed like a quote in a way!!!!!!! I wish that I could think of something like this... it can be taken in sooooooo many ways!!!!!!! It could be broken apart and observed in different details!!!!!!! Great write!!!!!!! Rock On!!!!!!!
xoxo
Meg
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