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fret

my. heart. is.
tucked in
to the corner of your smile

it sits
—oh so restless—
on your boyish lips

your voice
breezes past…
and my tiny heart

flutters

i’m scared…
one day
my heart might fall too far into your mouth

and get caught

in.
your.
teeth.

Author notes

trying to do justice to scribblings found in an old notebook of mine. tell me what you think.

the title isn't too weird/awkward is it?
Written September 16th, 2006

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  • thesilence
    October 3, 2006
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    yes, i was totally on thirteen whores ago.
    haha. but yes.
    yes. i'm back just like you thought i'd be. lol.
    you were on 6 hors ago. whores. hors. hehe. whores.
    i thought you'd left allpoetry fairly completely..?

  • Greenheart
    October 3, 2006
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    hahahaha i earned two points... i completely forgot about points oh and i need to check that damn clap box... let me go do that... oh and it says you were on 13 hors ago so i assume you'll be back....

  • Greenheart
    October 3, 2006
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    it's been a long damn time i've been here... i had to search through the comments on your page to figure out who this was.... you didn't actually think i was going to comment on your poetry did you? lol


  • tinuviel
    September 18, 2006
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    no, i rather like the title, actually. *hugs*