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you hurt me

You hurt me once long before
yet I still sit and wait for more
I wonder and think did you ever care
but then I think about that little teddy bear
You called me your baby
and I was your everything

But now its all changed and I regret
but this is to you and all I wanna say is

I LOVE YOU

Author notes

This is my ex bf brandan I love you still
Written September 18th, 2006

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  • gravrobrs crypt
    November 10, 2006
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    Thats nice hun...thank you 4 da write...keep writin

  • miel-anie
    September 18, 2006
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    ahh ! tat is so nice .. good job on your poem .. i really like the fact that you realize that he hurts you, and that you are sitting there for more .. or wellt hats how i saw it we hear about stories like that a lot, and they are touching every time .. we will never let go by something like that .. well i dont .. good job