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Have you ever felt-

Unloved and hurt?
Did you cry and dry your eyes
with a t-shirt?

Have you ever felt used?
because Cupid's wonderful arrow
got your heart abused?

Have you ever thought you'd go insane
because your heart
went through too much pain?

Have you ever felt like life was too tough
and you wanted to give up
because it was so rough?

Have you ever felt wrong?
and you felt sadder
when people told you to keep strong?

Have you ever felt upset after telling a lie?
You stare in the mirror
and ask yourself why?

Have you ever felt all of these things?
and you're afraid
of what
the future brings?

Author notes

It came, it was here, it was gone.
DX
bad moment.
Written September 18th, 2006

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  • Artificially Yours
    September 18, 2006
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    Heck yeah.I've felt like that so many times I've lost count.I know how you must be feeling.It flowed really well and it was a great write.

  • shoutuntoGod
    September 18, 2006
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    How sad. Good flow. Just to let you know sadder is not a word. Its more sad. Anyways..good write.

    -Shout