The claw-foot tub,
shimmering.
Submersed within it's sparkle,
amidst the green jello fantasies
and whipped cream dreams.
Cool touch to sweltering skin,
join me,
as my fantasy becomes yours...
a reality.
Slipping deep into pools of passion,
loving caresses
within the ripple of lime luxuria.
Oh, do I dare wrestle;
wrestle with that never-ending
wiggle and jiggle?
The pulsing, enticing.
To see each green cube,
jump with our pleasures.
You know, all that is left
is to devour,
our just dessert.
Author notes
Um, a fond memory.
Written September 18th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Jell-O and Whipped Cream Fun by sexykitten87.
400 points, ended September 26, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thank you Joyce. Green, the color of arousal, or what they say. Hope your jello turns out as good as the memories I had, lol.
Storm -
FANTASTIC!!!!!
Storm, Jello is a very sensual food and when you say green I think of green m&ms which we always used to say were a woman's favorite because we thought of sexual pleasure with them. This was filled to the brim with imagery so enticing it makes me hungry for more than the jello without a doubt. Fantasies galore are what I am left with after finishing this awesome piece. I think I'll go whip up some jello right now.
Thank you for sharing and kudos on such a wonderful. Best wishes in the contest, you get a standing ovation to go along with my applause. Love and blessings for you, today and always. 
Joyce
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LOL, thanks Jeannie. Should try it sometime.
Storm -
Oh how totally yummy! Bet that was just awesome!! Wonderful writing, and the fantasies this is creating!! Thanks, and good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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LOL, sorry, just kind of went whack and out it came. Thanks for the comment,
Storm -
brings a lot of fantasy to mind...........it's very refreshing, sexy and cute..........nice job.
good luck in the contest!!!!!!!
-evelyn -
Thank you for the comment, appreciate it.
Storm -
I loved this, cute, sexy, and clean. Beautiful job!!
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Most welcome, darling. I always enjoy your writes, only fair to let you know how much..
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Thank you for the comment, appreciate it.
Storm -
Heh, this was great. Cute, short-n-sweet, nice job. Definitely some nice memories.....
SeductiveWishesAndBloodiedKisses
-Allura -
LOL, well get wigglin' hun. Thanks for the comments.
Storm -
Mmmmm! I like the sounds of this one! Hehehe!
I just got the giggles
Thinking of those jiggles
Now it makes me wanna wiggle!
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Ummm, that's what I said. The contest offered up jello and whipped cream, coudln't help it, lol. Thanks sweetie.
Storm -
This one brought up some old memories thanx hun.
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Ummm, nope, I don't think Jello will work there. You can try, but I can see it leaking out the sides, lmao. Thanks for the comment hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
Damn, Storm. This brings ideas to mind, but I only have a shower. I don't think Jello will stand a chance being squashed down the drain. lol Darn it. Very nice entry, sweety. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks sweetheart, appreciate the comments. It's very much appreciated.
Storm -
loved this one, "Submersed within it's sparkle,
amidst the green jello fantasies
and whipped cream dreams" loved that stanza there, excellent write.
much love and many hugs
Dark
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