Torn between love and friendship, to know
Everything rests on that line. Lead me
Across the threshold so I may see the
Reasons of time. No more saddened
Sorrows, can this heart bare. But how to put
Out there that I truly care. All these
Feeling deep inside, I find I must confess. But
All the fear I feel, keeps the truth suppressed.
Confused by my own actions, don't know what to do.
Letting emotional fear, throw my mind askew. To
Open up my heart, would surely be a gamble. Then
Wonder if, once again I get trampled. Just look at me,
Now see why I frown, and watch the falling tears of a clown.
Author notes
Option 3 = )
Titled per Smokey, of course
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Written September 18th, 2006
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Thank you hun. Please don't think one poem is better over the other, just different views that come from within. I appreciate your comments.
Storm -
so beautifully written.
i have a poem titled teardrops from a clown
but your poem is way better and very touching
suits the title.
i know we hardly talk and don't know me
but yes i guess you have to follow what your heart will tell you.
fight for that love if you must
never fear that your friendship with this person will end once you tell him the truth.
you will only get an answer to what you are feeling if you will tell him exactly what you want him to know
(just rambling my dear)
thank you for sharing
you are talented
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Thanks hun, much appreciated.
Storm -
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Hey sis this was very nicely done. Thanks for your poem and the best of luck to you in the contest.
Kari -
Thank you for the comments, much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed.
Storm -
Holy Crap! I'm speechless. I love this. Great write and I love the pic. This was just simplely amazing. So much for being speeckless though lol
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Thank you hun. I know. It just kind of jumped out on to the screen before I even realized I had typed it. But you are right, and I know your words are real. Thank you again.
Storm -
Sweety, life has taught us so many lessons to live by. Some good, many bad, but one thing I have learned is to never give up. It's taken me years of searching and so many heartaches, but I have found whom I sought. Don't ever let a chance go by, sweetheart. I know it's difficult, but don't. You may find more pain, but what if you don't? If you find yourself knocked down again, pick yourself up and look elsewhere. It's out there. Somewhere.
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Thanks hun, appreciate your comment.
Storm -
Hey sweetie. I have to agree with the others and say do what feels right. You have a lot of friends here that can support you. If you dont take that chance then you live life always wondering what if. I love you baby
Track -
Adrian, believe me, I understand that fear all too well. And true friends wouldn't abandon for any reason, or darn near almost any reason. Thank you for the comment hun.
Storm
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Storm, this is a beautifully expressive write that touched me personally. If it wern't for the fact that I know in my heart it is advice I would be too frightened myself to take, I would agree with Night Valkyrie and tell you to trust your heart, in truth I feel it rarely leads you wrong. But I don't give advice I wouldn't take, fear of rejection even by one close to me is too much for me.
I wish you the best as always and hope you take the advice I didn't give you. Its a double or nothing bet I suppose except that a true friend would not abandon you for being honest.
Good luck in the contest
Adrian
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As I said Jay, I'm trying. Thank you for being so supportive, and well thank you for just being you. I love you too hun.
Storm -
Sweety, I agree with Vickie, just open it up and let it all pour out. You know your heart is huge, and others can see that as well. You will find your hopeful babe, I am sure of it.
love ya
-Jay -
I am trying Vickie, I am really trying. But so often that fear takes over... too many times it's been the standard. You know, we learn from experience, and experience has shown me, forget it. But I still try. Thanks love, appreciate it.
Storm -
Autumn, as you have told me, uh, recently no less, it's a risk we have to take. Or you never know what might just pass you by. You encouraged me to take that leap, with faith and truth in my heart, now I am hinting you do the same. Subtle, eh? Just trust what feelings are in your heart, don't let life go by without ever knowing. I almost did. And that, my dear, would have made me a fool. I love you hon.
Vickie
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