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Hell

As she sits in her personal Hell,
She is ravished and raped by fire,
The flames rise among her burning ember eyes,
And in fear, her little flowers die.

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Written September 18th, 2006

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  • gypsyfish
    September 18, 2006
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    excellent/so close to home

    just because there is a 'personal hell', does not mean, that there is a fire. and i, (speaking for myself) don't think it is the 'fear' that is killing all the little flowers. think about that. (i'm just speaking for myself) love GYSPYfish
    Edited on Sep 18, 12:40 because ''.