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The dawning day

The Moon was tired and weary; he knew his time was done
So he sent his greatest warriors to meet and greet the Sun
Armed with bow and quiver walking toward the dawning day
One knelt down onto the ground to touch and smell the clay

Mother Earth was standing there; she touched their coats of hide
She said she’ll journey with them, to be their earthly guide
As they climbed up mountains, she cloaked them both in shrouds
As they crossed great wastelands, she protected with her clouds

Standing there before the Sun, asking why they were there
He answered `tis the season, to learn a brand new prayer
The vibration of the universe has changed its sacred song
A new day now is dawning; your time left is not that long

So tell your people “watch the sky” looking toward the sun
The Moon has handed me his keys, his part is nearly done
For all of earthly creatures, people must lead the way
Gather all the nations and walk toward the dawning day





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Written September 18th, 2006

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  • Sonoske
    March 1, 2007

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    This is a very nice poem and i love the whole thing about the moon and the sun and especially the part about the clouds covering the sun so the heat wont sear the indians. Good poem love david.


  • Fall.Of.Rome
    September 18, 2006
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    An interesting poem, I rather like it. It flows well, it provides vibrant imagery (I read the poem before looking at the picture). Very good work


  • queen Moderators member
    September 18, 2006
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    You have got some serious skills with that pen. This is FANTASTIC, MARVELOUS, AWESOME all rolled into one Well done


  • individuality gold member
    September 18, 2006
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    a rich tapesty here, a great flow and rhythm. hope laughing into the sky. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...

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