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Smile

With a new day abound,
raise those sleepy eyelids
stretch and yawn,
Mr. Sunshine is smiling brightly
at the break of dawn

Staggering and stumbling
into the kitchen.
Make the coffee,
hear it dripping.
Put a smile on your face
sit back and relax,
don't hasten the pace.

Today is your day
have not a care in the world.
Indulge yourself,
do what you love,
grab a spoon and eat
the chocolate frosting
from it's tub.

Put on the music,
dance the Funky Chicken in the nude
if your feeling the urge to.
Order Chinese,
ask for the chopsticks,
no ones around
to see you make a mess.

Grab your notebook and pen
and a glass of wine to.
Off to the bathtub for you.
Pour some bubbles,
light some candles,
sit and relax.

Write a poem reflecting this day
with not a worry to be found
for all those troubles
have been casted away.
May happiness fill your soul
with each new day abound.



Author notes

This was written for my friend Kari, may her spirits be lifted and her heart shine.
Written September 18th, 2006

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  • November 12, 2006
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    wow awesome! i'm not a good poet but you are. look at how you versed it and made it wonderful and expressed everything.. your a insperational person


  • grannyeri gold member
    October 18, 2006
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    This poem would make anyone feel better. Both your poems were wonderful. Congrats on the silver for the other one.


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    September 27, 2006
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    This is great! I would definitely be lifted after reading this. You are a true blessing to so many people. Good luck in the contest. God Bless.


  • freespirit51
    September 18, 2006
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    Great write Rose. I hope your cute poem does it's job and puts a smile on her face and inher heart.


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    September 18, 2006
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    Very good write for a very good friend. GHood luck in the contest my love.


    Patrick


  • Firequeen
    September 18, 2006
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    what a wonderful uplifting write.
    sweet and fun.
    Ty for this wonderful poem.
    Good luck to you.


  • Kari gold member
    September 18, 2006
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    Good Luck!

    awwwwwwwwww this was so funny it put a smile on my face you did wonderful Mistress...the very best of luck to you in the contest I loved it. This was very personal.

    Kari

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