Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
 

May I Have This Dance

Clouds of grey smother a moon,
shrouded in their
somberness.

Obscured within the
wicked temptation,
caliginous.

Barren of sensation,
a pillaged soul,
drifting hopelessly into
a darkened abyss.

Entombed by emotion,
a somber glaze within the eyes.

Vitiated by self persecution,
damned to a solitary existence.
Left dreaming,
begging,
to dance the dance
of eternal sleep.

Author notes


Written September 18th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 18, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Just some mindless babbling hun, I'm ok. Promise.

    Thank you
    Storm

  • Night Valkyrie
    September 18, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Eek! Autumn! I don't like the way that ends. Though, I do understand the emotion. I love you my sweet sister, always. My ♥ on Valk's wings.

    Vickie

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 18, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Thanks Sandy, I can already see where my writing is going today. It's going to be one of those days. Appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • Heavenly Angel
    September 18, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Oooh girl, what a piece! Poignant and so beautifully; tenderly written...
    Your talent shines on, girl!