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Our Hearts

Her Heart

Held in our hands
keeping it close
to nurture and love.
To heal of its pain.
Absorb the sadness.
Diminish the dark.


Our Hearts

Held out to her
to keep close
to feel the love.
To heed her pain.
Distribute the joy.
Cast upon the light.


One Heart

Held together by three
kept close in hand
bonded by love.
Protected from pain.
Shared in happiness.
Illuminating the path...

of Our friendship.

Author notes

Written for Broken Wings Fly........
Written September 18th, 2006

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  • slipperssun gold member
    January 21, 2007

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    this shows so much feeling and has a great flow...
    Friendships can be one of the most important things in our lives... if you find a true one then treasure it with all you've got... fantastic write


  • catz Moderators member
    September 29, 2006
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    This is a lovely poem for our dear Kari. She's sure a special lady.

    Congratulatons on winning the Silver A very deserving write

    F: Dee


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 29, 2006
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    Lovely sentiments expressed in these line- congratulations for winning silver in this contest.

  • cheryln
    September 28, 2006
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    very touching, well done!


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 18, 2006
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    Very,very beautiful
    Great friend you are
    She feels it too
    XXJeannette


  • Firequeen
    September 18, 2006
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    so beautiful


  • BeautifulCalamity08
    September 18, 2006
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    Beautiful

    This is extremely good! This is really special...so sweet and caring...

    Bonded by love...

    wonderful words!

    Great write! Keep up the good work!

    With Words Of Love and Hope,
    Music


  • Kari gold member
    September 18, 2006
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    Good Luck!

    This poem made me cry...more so these words right here
    Held together by three
    kept close in hand
    bonded by love
    Thanks for sharing and the best of luck to you in the contest.

    Kari

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