I wish I was an animal.
I want to swim with the dolphins.
I want to howl with the wolves.
I want to glide with the eagles.
I want to be a animal because...some times
the world is so cruel.
Author notes
Written September 17th, 2006
A contest entry
- For the kids 14 and under: SELF EXPRESSION! LET IT ALL COME OUT! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended September 21, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Make a Wish" Contest for kids age 14 and under! by Starz of Heaven.
550 points, ended July 26, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Poems of all sorts by kids to age 13 by Periwinkle Blue.
550 points, ended January 4, 2008, 19 entries
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What did you think
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Well said, and truly spoken, good poet!
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This is a nice write. I wish i could be a bird sometimes to fly away but knowing my luck i would get shot by a hunter
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Yes, what you say is true, but animals live in a cruel world, too, Angelo. Think about the food chain!
A very fine poem, YES!
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very good
a very lovely poem thank you for sharing this with us (just change it to the world is so cruel, good luck in the contest with this lovely little poem
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A fantasy I'm sure many have these days. Very good Angelo.
Thanks for entering. Good luck, buddy.
Brian
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