Floating on top
Of my watery grave.
I can't feel anything,
Except for the things that fill me.
Here we rest.
[With what is the rest of us]
Waiting for fate to deal a different hand.
For now I'm eating myself alive
On top of the world
I suppress the things that make me human
With small strands of hope that tear me apart
And bury me with the rest
As we die on the inside
But you can't feel anything
The storms over our hearts
Destroying the only place that I could call home
Author notes
"No fair" he cried into her arms
"I know babe, but I knew we couldn't last" she sighed
...It was just too perfect...
Written September 17th, 2006
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ooh... nice! do you write music? it's amazing how some of the most depressing stuff makes the most beautiful music. You're talented, there's no doubt about that.
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i probably sound bitchy and stupid;
but what is this about?
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thanks =]
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You haven't written for a while. I'm sorry this was your reason for starting again though , but it's a really good poem. You're living through this, it's tough, but you'll be a stronger person when you come out of it. (Remember that annoying saying what doesn't kill you makes you stronger? Blah, bad place for me to use it, but you know what I mean.) Keep writing!
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sadly enough that did happen.
[yes he finally cried, I about pissed myself]
and that was what went down.
except the next part was
"It's just kinda funny to think that a small cute little blonde girl has so much power over a monster like me"
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oooooohhhh did the author's comment part really happen?! thats so sad...this poem is honestly really good!!
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Understandable
AWWWW Grace! Such beautifully sad words. It made me want to cry for you! And your author comments are just as heart renching as the rest of it. The way you formatted this is very unique and I like it a lot. Keep writing, and try to stay in touch!!!
-BxBxBx
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