Inhale my essence,
on gasps of fire.
I’ll breathe your dreams;
…exhale desire.
Lay me down,
on perfumed ground.
Caress me till,
fulfillment’s found.
Gaze at me,
With star filled eyes.
Leave not one flame,
in envious skies.
Shower me,
in love’s sweet dew.
and keep this heart,
…that beats for you.
Patricia Gibson-Little
Author notes
I really loved both Lurie and Joe's poems... I haven't gotten to deedee's yet, but I will. I loved "Abandon" too, but this one inspired me first. I hope you like it.
Written April 22nd, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- ~~Challenge For Lurie~~ by -Dawn-.
1000 points, ended April 27, 2003, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you... I'm so glad that everyone liked my poem so much.
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This is beautiful and congratulations on winning first place
indeed a lovely write......Sherry
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ok...I'm a fan! hot!hot!hot!
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This is quite beautiful what a lovely flow to this one and as I read it it reminded me almost of something Laura would herself write
Beautiful work....good luck in the challenge
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Joe: You're right Laura is an ispiration. One I realy needed. I can't wait to read more of her stuff. Thank you for the wonderful comments.
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Jeeze what an amazing write!!!! I almsot got lost inside each verse!!!! Aww Joe....
~Laura
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My goodness this is steadily becoming difficult this was such a sensual and longing write it speaks in such passion, I really enjoyed this one very much thank you so much, and ya know isn't Laura such an inspiration LOL myyy ya know me never noticed how much I gained inspiration from me sweet Laura til I started reading these beaitiful poems all these wonderful entries are coming in from, well this is just immensely enjoyable reading, kinda like love is spreading all about in the same way sadness does around here I love it but then me loves the lovey sensual writes, very beautiful
most sincerely,
joe -
awesome
this is an amazing poem, great way of ryming and just beutiful words, real hit home with this one, good luck with the challenge
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