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The one who holds my heart!

Such little timing
Made such a difference,
Both inside and out

Every waking moment,
you'd impacted on me
Sudden happiness

No longer in a state
of depression, instead
overfilled with joy

Holding you when near,
every waking moment
you are my thoughts

How could I go on
without you in my life
something I couldn't do

Couldn't imagine life
without your surroundings
being apart of life,

feeling important to you,
Feeling as I am loved
like I feel for you

I owe my world to you,
Never felt this way
about anyone before

Author notes

This is dedicated to the special person I am head over heels about. Hoping nothing could force us apart, my life is dedicated 100% to you.
Written September 17th, 2006

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  • ecrivain01
    February 4, 2008
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    This would make ...

    a great Valentine's card for that particular person. Very nice.


  • Neptunian Scorpion
    September 17, 2006
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    Sweet

    It is always wonderful to read poetry about love. The feeling is intoxicating and is the source of many great pieces. Hope things go the way your heart desires them to.

    Take care.
    Dimitri


  • The Eyes of a Angel
    September 17, 2006
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    wonderful job. Thanks for entering and good luck. I hope everything work out with that.