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Moonlit Night

The moonlight
Wakes my every dream at night
And I can't sleep

Look at the night sky
As it cries for you
I don't wish to see you cry too

Not wanting you
To be in pain
But it seems you're hurt again

Wipe your tears
I'm always here
I'll never stop loving you

Now dawn breaks
As the mist vanishes
It appears no matter what it takes

As I start to see
The morning dew
Can't imagine what a day it would be

Now here comes the sunlight
Letting me forget
The moonlit night

Author notes

Written April 3rd, 2006

I have to say this is my worst poem to date...it's so syruppy I don't know why I wrote it..LOL..

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  • Bapudi
    May 26, 2007
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    syrupy, yes

    I especially like the part about your dreams waking. How does a dream wake, exactly?


  • darl3n3
    November 20, 2006
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    ang drama kuya!!!

    yeah,but it's good...

    is it one of your band's songs?
    or would they kill you first before they play it...


  • dozydoughnut
    September 18, 2006
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    aww thats so sweet loved it!!

    luv dd


  • marmalade
    September 18, 2006
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    wonderfully sad, thank you for entering