You send me your address
I mapquest the directions
and in 30 minutes I am there.
The first time I am meeting you
wearing the short skirt you requested
and no panties like you said.
You start kissing me
before hello has even escaped my lips.
We kiss hard and tender
and move to the bedroom.
I lay you back upon the bed and take off your pants
I can see you are ready for me.
I swallow you like a hungry child,
trying to show you how good I can be,
you lift me off of you
and move around behind me where I am waiting for you,
warm and wet.
You instruct me where to lie on the bed
and I raise my hips in anticipation.
You start slowly, stretching me to fit you
and as my breath gets faster and I start to moan,
you push harder and push me over the edge.
You ask me if I am cumming and I can only scream a yes,
and you keep at me.
I come four more times and can feel my own warmth on my thighs.
And then we chat, idle talk,
before I dress and go.
The most fantastic quickie I have ever had.
Author notes
Written in the heat of the moment...or rather, right after the heat of the moment...forgive me if it needs editing...
Written September 16th, 2006
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LOL...um...WOW. *is in shock* Is it wrong to find that hot? *scratches behind head* At any rate, it was erotic and highly entertaining. Kudos!
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Thank you so very much Frederick, I appreciate the comments greatly. I am glad you liked the piece and the way I put it together.
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I can't help but chuckle as the date here is September 16, my birthday, so I read it all connected to the piece's whole up there - "One Night On September 16" (I'll blushingly leave out the "by pyewacket" part of that flow of words and my warped mindset,,,what can I say, I remember the movie and pyewacket's role) -
...seriously, this talented poetical wordsmith delivers this erotically charged piece with, among other means, a seemingly natural sense of pacing, spacing and use of aural vibrations to offer something here that comes off as being for a "friend," instead of to the usual invited audience members and/or voyuer! A knack of a truly talented word piece creator and poetry/word creation with a tale!
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I had a very simialer experience. I actually got a hello out first and then the kiss that woke the rest of my body....ahh how the memory feels....thanks for the reminder!
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there is nothing like a good quickie i say, keep the blood flowing through the veins - a good piece. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Well you've created a steamy, rather blush-worthy poem in a succint amount of words. Sounds like a rather hot event.
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My Goodness.....is this based on fiction? Or truth? Your author comments lead me be believe the latter.
Very descriptive write.
Your words paint a very real picture.
Blessings! Tammy
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good write
I think this sent me down memory lane a few years back... I might have had a ummmm errr... sporadic encounter... or two! This was a good write and you were quite expressive, not the read I expected, but it was cleanly delivered! Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work. Glad you had fun... be safe! Tia -
Thank you, I am glad you liked it...I wrote it so quickly I wasn't sure if the feeling would actually show...
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Nice... The heat flows through. That was pretty simple n sweet for a first time. Purely physical, purely lust! I enjoyed it.
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