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A Revived Heart

My heart is empty and hidden,
Hidden away from a world,
A world so judgemental,
You fear the taunting of your heart,
A heart so fragile it can demolish into nothing.
Nothing is what you fear to feel,
Because without feelings
Means to live without love
To live without love is to live without joy,
Without joy is to lead a somber life.
And when you hit that point,
All hope feels lost.
But, hope can be regained with friendship,
Friendship leads to love and joy,
That's where you entered the equation.
When I met you, I felt joy,
That joy lead to friendship,
Such a friendship lead to a powerful love,
Love removed all doubts, hopelessness,
And darkness from my heart,
My heart now sings, " I love you my love,
My life, My one hearts desire!"

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Written September 16th, 2006

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  • She burns
    September 18, 2006
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    Love is you

    This is just so beautiful,very touching and heartfelt,It makes me wanna cry,From sad to joyness of your heart,It's like a song,How love gives life to us,The beauty of it,It's forever...

    Hunny....your heart is not empty,It's full of light,Light that will always shines,your love is a wind,Even though I can't see it,I will always feel it....

  • hurt not broke
    September 17, 2006
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    AMAZING!

    I love this poem.
    It flows very well
    its absolutly amazing.
    I understand what u mean in this poem i tryed to write one like this several months ago but it was no where near as good as your poem.
    -kassie-