Look at me
How I have changed
My life used to be so happy
What went wrong?
I will never know
The smile
I always wear
Is only visible
On the outside
Inside I cry
I am empty
I walk Around
The grim reaper
Appearing on my top
Follows me everywhere
Waiting to strike
Waiting for the day
I finally break
Until then I stay
Smiling on the outisde
Crying on the inside
Wanting to be set free
The angel yearns for freedom
Her pain screaming out
Her once beautiful eyes
Now sad and tearful
Trapped inside
A demons body
I may look alive
Feel alive
Even act alive
but the demons
have taken over me
Slowly draining away
Every last ounce
Of energy I once owned
Inside I am dieing
As the demons kill
The angel that was once me
Author notes
Well, its a poem partially about my feelings, but it symbolises the angel, demon fight going on inside us all every day, in this case the demons are winning. I know it may seem the saem as many other poems out there, but I am thinking about doing a series of poems on the fight between good and evil, and how different ones can come through and triumph. Some will be related to fantasy, others to everyday life. So keep watch for these poems 
-Libbi-
Written September 16th, 2006
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I base most of my poems on angels and demons these days, whether they are fantasy poems where the angels and demons exist as beings themselves, or related in real life, where the angels and demons control our concience. I'm glad you like it . hanks for commenting, I really appreciate it
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Wow...This is really good, and I get where you're coming from. It's strong, sad, and vivid. Thanks for the write. I think the line[s] I most like, are the
Inside I am dieing
As the demons kill
The angel that was once me
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Thanks . I dont really know why, but I have felt like this myself quite recnetly. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting and applauding. I really appreciate it
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god! that was mad good! its how i feel everyday latley.
a smile that shines
decieving all the minds
what a wonderfull way to die
as the tears brim to my eyes
cant wait for ur next one! keep writing.
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