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Inspiration

He said there was
nothing she could ever do
to make the love he felt,
fade or dissolve.
He said he loved her,
completely
forever and ever
to never end.

She remembers
the hugs, the long
conversations,
the peace they shared.
She holds onto the times
she spent happy
and truely inspired,
he was her inspiration.

He walks hand in hand
with another now,
absent mindedly
tearing her limb from limb.
One embrace,
one look the way things were
would help her smile again
would make the tears stop flowing.

He sits in the back
his ear phones blaring,
she will walk past
a million times.
Oblivious he stares
into the eyes of another
never to part
for there is a love there.

She said he would go far,
even if not with her,
because she said she would
always see this look.
She tolds him,
between sobs and screams
that he would love another forever
for he looked at his new love
like she used to look at him.

Author notes

This is about me and my ex and how promises get broken and people drift apart and friendships once strong become nothing...
Hope this helps the inspiration process
Written September 16th, 2006

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  • Varkatzas
    October 3, 2006
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    this is when i say "dont get mad/sad/glad get even" go out with his brother or best friend. haha not something id do but its what i suggest. i hate how relationships work, and how usually your significant other moves on before you do when it all ends. i cant think of a more lonely feeling... LIFE IS VERY LONG...
    ~~~varkatzas


  • mascararunning
    September 17, 2006
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    thank you so much

  • hiddenbeauty51011
    September 16, 2006
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    this is an exalent poem, good job