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Citrus kisses poison my tongue; leaving reviled memories
Impaled in my flesh, forever a part of me.
And its the smile on my face that betrays my true feelings,
For spite must have left its mark upon my cheek.
A smirk plastered on my lips
May deceive those foolish enough to believe;
But Im not concerned about them,
Sweetie, all I really care about is making you writhe.

And your so fucking ugly, I see it now;
All the little things you seemed to hide so well.
I cant stand the thought of you
No doubt I couldnt stomach the sight;
Your such a broke record
And Ive gotten sick of all these lines,
So shove them back down your throat
Take your pills; I hope you choke.

Youre a fake and the worlds starting to see
Your not worthy of the breath that fills those hated lungs;
So ring the bell until death comes knocking
will you repeat your validations now?
Recite the excuses that got you threw life so far?
Be a man and take the blame, and stay the fuck out.of.my.life.

And its not that I hate you,
its just I despise every second your left on this earth.
And its not that I'm bitter;
no, you just ripped my fucking world apart.

Author notes

Love is a waste of time darlings, trust me HATE is so much better..



This poem was written ages ago when me and Nathans relationship went to shit. TO be honest he was the worst bf I'd ever had, which is fucking saying something. Yes, ive changed, maybe not for the better, but ive changed. The old Christina so many thought they new is gone; this is the new me, the me that dousnt put up with shit and despises drama. Dont fuck with me; if you do i will not hesitate to rip your fucking life apart.
Written September 16th, 2006

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  • artisticxpoetry
    September 23, 2006
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    good


  • liquidfire
    September 20, 2006
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    beautifully wicked

    Damn....its.... its.... beautifully wicked... it sounds like a song i just wanted to started singing it when i read it....(thats a good thing lol)but anyways this one deserves a hundered appluses (although i dont think i can give that many) and im srry it took so much pain and hatred to write this amazing poem
    hillary*
    (hope u win)

  • wonderful-now89
    September 17, 2006
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    So shove them back down your throat
    Take your pills; I hope you choke.

    Brilliant. I know how you feel and this is brilliant.