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Make Believe

Here we are
Finally I can be free
Be myself
The person I’ve always
Tried so hard to be,
Strived so hard to become..

I am free,
I am loved,
And I do not fear anything.

Finally,
Things slot into place,
Pieces of a puzzles,
Personifications of perfection..

Life is worth living,
Life is worth loving..

Things are so much better
In this make- believe love story

..Too bad it’s a dream
That will never come true..

Author notes

Short and simple. Call it emo, DON'T call it cliche.
Written September 16th, 2006

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