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Rain (Haiku)

I watch the clouds while
  thunder and lightning lash out
      as the rains set in

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Haiku. Symbolic or not, I don't know. Pull what you will from it.
Written September 16th, 2006

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  • JennyFerFer
    September 16, 2006
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    wow, this one puts me there.
    Very impressive with the visual.

  • GoneAway4alife
    September 16, 2006
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    I adore Haiku and this was as good as any I have read on AP. thanks for sharing it with us