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Its Fine.

Its fine to pretend,
to be my friend,
then leave me when I need you the most.

Its fine to lie,
and underestimate my,
dangerously low self esteem.

Its fine to joke,
make fun and poke,
when I'm feeling at my lowest.

Its fine to pretend,
to be my friend,
then leave me when I need you the most.

Because I have real friends,
as well as the ones like you.

Author notes

Wah.
I hate life.

Written September 16th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    December 21, 2006

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    Lies and other friends...

    Darling

    Everyone lets everyone down
    stupid, selfish, and crazy
    making everone else clowns
    Oh that includes me.

    Smoosh

    Janet


  • Violent Serenity
    October 13, 2006
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    brilliant

    oh wow, nicely written, truthful and to the point. love the flow and rhyme. awsome job! keep it up!
    ^+_+^


  • x Loveless x
    October 2, 2006
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    Thankyou


  • XStuckInANightmareX
    September 29, 2006
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    Awesome poem hun! I know how you feel. I have friends like this. Keep ya head up n keep writing.

    ♥Alyssa♥