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long brunette curls.....

....long brunette curls
with a tint of a golden hue
catching the light
and brightening up the night
journey just begun
no longer just numb
hope and a promise of
tomorrows full of bliss
nothing but sublime
over the next hill
walking into a room with beauty
and being able to bask
with a pure smile
in loving moments
kiss tender enough
to melt away frustration
and carry away stress
just recall how much
we have been blessed
my konstant companion
and love for life.....

Author notes

its been too long since i've written happy poetry so .......what do ya think?
Written September 15th, 2006

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  • THeLasTBeAT
    October 11, 2006
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    I love you too babe...