We sit in the crowded cinema,
Our fingers laced together.
Your thumb gently stroking mine,
Your skin so soft and tender.
We’re walking, you clasp your hand in mine,
And then pull me into your embrace.
I look in your eyes and am mesmerized,
By the beauty of your face.
You kiss my cheek lightly,
I’m too scared to kiss your lips,
So you just hug me tightly again,
My hands placed on your hips.
We talk so easily,
I feel like I’ve known you for years.
You tell me your secrets,
And I confess to you my fears.
But then its time for you to go,
And I walk you to the bus.
Then you infuse your lips to mine,
And I know I’ll remember your first touch.
Author notes
This poem is basically about me & my girlfriend Alex's first meeting ^_^ xxxx
Written September 15th, 2006
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I know ive already commented on this but ive just come across it again n wanted to say how much of an awesome write it is. its so true how everyone remembers there first touch..
how it seems at the time like nothing can ever go wrong......n then it does n you wish more than anything you could have that touch again, or just touch them one last time....
sorry, slight ramble. i really hope your happy tho and still with Alex.
keep writting.
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Very sweet, very cute hunnie. It's nice to see such a sweet, light, beautifully, happy, vibrant poem from you. You'll get that again with someone Iknow you will. I must admit this one is dear to my heart by you because it reminds me of my girl. If it wasn't for you we wouldn't be together and I need to thank you for that. Hope you fine it again soon babe, but enjoy your friends for now, they're what'll keep you going throughout life, always being there. I'm proud to class myself as one of those people.
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wow that was beautiful... and so well described
I can totally relate...you always remember the first moments of meeting the one you love...
"I look in your eyes and am mesmerized,
By the beauty of your face." I thought tht was awesome well done! xx Ree xx
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Awwwww, this is so so good! i love it, so sweet, and it flows and rhymes perfectly, this is really a great write i shall deffinatly be applauding. its funny how you remember the smallest details of times like that...i love it. awesome write, keep it up!!!
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this was really cute... i remember when my boyfriend are I were like this but after a year things change and ... well i like ur poem alot good job!
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