You smile like summer sun
Always bright and warm,
You're sparkly like stars
Perfectly you, pouring light
Over hiding worlds
Left without you they'd remain forever invisible
Lost without your sparkle
You're everyone's starlight in the dark
x Thankyou x
Author notes
For Polly, it has Yay Polly down the side
but really thankyou to polly, i wouldn't be myself if i didn;t know you
you're open and kind and amazing^-^ a starr this poem isn't that complicated but i wanted ot get yay polly and make it simplish because long ones always get too complicated.... hehe I entered it as a children's poem
Written September 15th, 2006
A contest entry
- Miss Polly's Contest by x dark fairie x.
1000 points, ended September 24, 2006, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Some beautifully conveyed points, all so perfectly true.. Well done my dear. And go polly!
I'm her pet wolf. So I know just how amazing she is!
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im sparkly YAY ME!! this is so sweeeeeet thank you xoxo
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you're amazing thank you xoxoxoxox
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hehe thankyouu, i don't think sparkly is actually a word but i wanted to poem to be simpler and polly is sparkly^-^ you can be sparkly too if you want t
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arrrrrrrrrrrhhh thank you thant's so sweet!! i love it i didn't realise the yay part before... im rather impressed with that!!! my favourite line was "You're everyone's starlight in the dark" because i thought it was so true... yay this contest just keeps getting better!!! lol... excellent write, thank you for sharing and thank you so much for entering. good luck in my contest!! love Ash -x-x-x-
p.s ... now you can write a poem about how great i am!! hee hee only kidding - loves ya!!! -
awesome!
Wow, that is really good. the bad thing is that it is so short. you do have a point about long poems being complicated at times. this was absolutely amazing. I and very refreshing to the soul. good job keep writing!
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