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For Adeleh

She is my AP child;

Her nature sweet and mild

With mind so wondrous bright,

A model for God's wight.


A beauty not of feature,

My gentle, loving creature,

But Beauty of the soul,

Voiced song of the viole.


My unique and precious girl,

A gem, not ruby, jet, or beryl,

But my mystic Persian pearl!

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Written September 15th, 2006

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  • grannyeri gold member
    September 18, 2006
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    Hope you continue to pass on kindness in the theme of this contest.

  • Vernal Bloom
    September 17, 2006
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    ahsant

    A poem for me? Wow, auntie, you completely cheer me up today. You’re really so kind, so nice to me. I want to say there is a telepathy among hearts. I have the same feeling about you. Thanks for everything

    ~Adeleh~

  • grannyeri gold member
    September 15, 2006
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    Thank you for your entry. Will judge on Sunday - pleased you took part in this contest.