I am waiting for you by the gate
just like the letter said
you told me not to be late
In this letter I read
You said that you had news for me
that I would want to hear
So I showed up a quarter of three
because your letter was sincere
So here I await anxiously
just me myself and I
So far I'm alone
And I don't know why
So I sit and ponder
whats the big news
my mind starts to wander
then I get confused
Now it is after three
Just me myself and I
I am waiting anxiously
And I don't know why
I came early
I thought this would be better
then the thought that occurred
to pull out your dear letter
So here I am standing
just waiting by the gate
I realize I'm silly
I have the wrong date
Author notes
Just goofin
Written September 15th, 2006
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Joe, Thank you simply said
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of course you would make a comeback with a smile, so much you my friend. and i guess this is “shel” style (though i am not familiar with it), and you really have fun with it and you make the reader join in it with both feet. frolicky and lovely.
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You know Timothy you are right. It was fun to get the grips on my dear pen. It makes me smile the smile like its all worthwile. Thank you, you sweet poetic soul!
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Always nice to read from you sweet soul, it's fun just to pen once again is it not my friend..? I know you'll have fun getting back in the swing of things, and this was a fun read and kept my thoughts captivated, much love sweet soul.
-Timothy
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your welcome sweety!
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Billie my sweet wench sister thank you for dropping by. I have missed myself if that makes any sense
Its good to be back!
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LOL...so like me hun. I have what I call "Dori moments" all the time. Simply adorable. Welcome back hun, ltns. I have missed your grace and quirkiness. Hugs. Fantastic write here.
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aww, this was a cute little poem...
thanks for the read hun.
Tammy
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