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Faultless

I am faultless just look at me,
I'm perfect in every shape and form.
Beautiful is my name as I lurk in your paths,
You knew me more when I died then when I was born.

I'm famous my name highlights the world,
Ashamed am I not at all you will soon see.
I've crafted the fine art of the pen that you have,
I am faultless between you and me.

I'm radiant and my clothing will soon show,
That I can dance around in the gloomy moon.
Parading around in a fancy show at most,
You will be yelling my name from the highest mountains soon.

FAULTLESS chant it away with me,
You know that no matter what you do I'm better!
You can assume that people look to you but they don't,
I am FAULTLESS and greater I'm a merciless go getter.

Do not deem my words of how wonderful I am,
I'm perfect and radiant and pleasant much more than you,
I'm faultless not a single doubt in my mind,
But how proud I am for I'm faultless as you are a mere nothing true.

Am I predictable in my way of fashion?
I only can see what you may now see or know.
When one becomes FAULTLESS you become merely a shadow,
A shadow I'll soon go in for the kill that WILL BE some show!

I am faultless just look at me,
I'm perfect in every shape and form.
Beautiful is my name as I lurk in your paths,
You knew me more when I died then when I was born!

~FAULTLESS~

Author notes

Option # 18 was never chosen: FAULTLESS. AmIPredictable: Great contest Idea.
Written September 14th, 2006

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  • The.Stars.Go.Blue
    September 15, 2006
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    Your rhyme and rhythm were a little off in your first stanza, but I like the way this poem picked up afterward. Good job.


  • stormigrl
    September 15, 2006
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    DAVE!!!!! Papa Smurf returns to me WOOHOO!!! lol.
    Hey looks like I got a secondary fan in us lol.
    Marianne

  • afireinthisheart
    September 15, 2006
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    outstanding write

    outstanding write Marianne...smile and hugs...love,David