Eyes closed,
dreaming.
Feeling your touch
tracing
trails
across
flesh.
Burning, yearning
in need of your caress.
Subtle moans.
Your breath,
tangled with tingling skin.
Soft, warm.
Gentle sighs.
I sense your lips
grazing mine,
tender and passionate.
Our kiss,
explosive.
My body,
begging for you,
your love.
To open my eyes,
and find,
You're a million miles away.
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Written September 14th, 2006
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Thank you hun, most appreciated.
Storm -
Beautiful poem Storm. A nice poem to wake up too. Thx for sharing. ~~~James
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Me too. Funny thing, we are just opposite. Yours here where I am, and the person I am thinking of, there where you are. Sigh.
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Storm -
Thanks hun, most appreciated.
Storm -
Oh how wonderful this is, Storm! Made me think of someone so very special to my heart! Awesomely written!
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Deep
Yup.I can relate.This was very deep and I am sure a lot of ppl can share these same feelings.Thanks for sharing sis.Awesome job as always.
Kari -
Thank you hun. Appreciate it.
Storm -
Nice write baby. I do know what you mean.
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Thanks hun, your comments are most appreciated.
Storm -
Excellent
This is such a beautifully sensual piece. I love the rythem and flow as well as the depth and passion and how easily you provide the imagery to the reader. Great job thanks for sharing this with me....Michael -
Yeah a bit. Thanks for the comments.
Storm -
ooo steamy with a trick ending. good work.
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