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I Miss You

It's almost a year
Since you left me alone
You're no longer here
And still, the pain is so hard

I miss you so much
Your midnight cries
I loved your sweet lil touch
And the way you smiled when I sung

You're an angel now, no more pain
I can't help but wonder
If things will ever be the same
I still want you here, with me

You are my son, Now and forever more
I don't want to believe your gone
My heart feels oh so sore
Please return to me, my precious lil one

Christian, I love you
And I always will
I know you miss me too
Why did this have to happen to you

It should've been me
Not someone innocent like you
Just keep close to that key
I'm coming to you sometime soon

I miss you Christian!

Author notes

Just about my son
Written September 14th, 2006

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  • WildFlame03
    September 20, 2006
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    beautiful

    beautiful write girl. I'm so sorry to hear about your loss. And yes this is the ghost of christmas past... all that matters is if u remember who I am.


  • Princess17
    September 18, 2006
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    hey good to hear from u again??? u mentioned me the other day??? is that a good thing or bad???? lol. When will i hear from you???? please call me or let me call u or something, PLEASE!


  • Morier
    September 18, 2006
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    love it

    pain is something felt all over time and time again no matter how it is delt its noless pain i love the write prin i envy you beyound words that you can only understand


  • ravenofdarkness
    September 14, 2006
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    aww good poem sorry for your sadness