It's not my fault I cut tonight
Me and my mom got in a fight
She threatend me with my one true love
Words I never even thought of
"Mom you know you can quit smoking"
"Well fine I want you to break up with Brandon"
Those words hurt me, I don't know why
When I got home I cut and cried
I was trying to save her health and mine
Because each cigarette takes off more time
She hit the steering wheel and said "Shut Up! Just shut up"
And I asked God why as I looked up
I stared out the window thinking about the blood
How it would come out in a massive bloody flood
When we got home my mom said "Get out!"
I hurried before she started to scream and shout
I was still in the car when she backed out of the drive
Did she want to kill me? Not what me to survive
All I know is we haven't talked in 1 hour
As tears cascade down my face, almost like a shower
I cut once again to release the pain within
Even though is one of the biggest sins
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Written September 14th, 2006
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hey hun,
me and my mom used to fight all the time and that when my cuttin worsed. plz dont let that happen to you, this is an amazing poem. i can really hear your cries and that scares me.
great write
falin-d -
I like the way the poem is written and everything Its flows well!
I know this isn't at all any of my businses but you know..theres other ways to relieve pain than cutting.
I used to do it and it hurt a lot of people that cared about me.
And i used to have friends that would cut and I would panic everynight that they would cut to deep that night and I'd never see them again.
I know I'm a complete stranger but I'm just i dunno babbling lol.
Good poem though sounds good! -
it's still not easy for her to just give up.
you tried to give up cutting
its the same thing.
CJ -
yeha ik she wasn't trying to kill me...But I didn'tknow what else to put in the poem..lol..Thanks for the Comment though!
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i know its a bit of a stupid question but are you ok? sounds like your moms just being a bitch, dont let this kinda shit get to you... she's not in controll as much as she'd like to think she is... would i be right in saying she doesnt know shit about what your goin' through...right? and as for her tryin' to kill you... she was probably pissed of and in a hurry, i dont think any human being can be that heartless...
however great poem, once again youve managed to out do all expectations... well done ^_^
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